Bright Beginnings in Writing

Capture my readers’ attention: Bright Beginning

·        It started off with a breakfast of scrambled eggs.  Normally, you wouldn’t care what I ate for breakfast, but unfortunately, today it matters.

·        Have you ever been on a tilt a whirl before?  Some think its fun, but it ended up not being so fun for me.

·        BARF!  That was pretty much the highlight of my day at the Amlings Haunted House.

·        Have you ever gotten so embarrassed that you didn’t think you could show your face again at school?  I have.  It all started with a breakfast of scrambled eggs…

·        One of the worst days of my childhood started off with a breakfast of scrambled eggs…